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Taegyu's Homework

교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2024-05-30
작성글 A. Make sentences with the following words: ESSENTIAL / NIGHTFALL / GAZE
You are essential for me to do my homework.
You have to come back home before nightfall.
They gazed each other because they are so simillar that no one could distinguish.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(05/28/24)
1. 이건 뭐니?
What's this?
2. 짧구나.
It's short.
3. 아니야. 긴 연필이야.
No, it's long.
교정내용

A. Make sentences with the following words: ESSENTIAL / NIGHTFALL / GAZE

You are essential for me to do my homework.

Better: It's essential for me to do my homework. ✔​

You have to come back home before nightfall.✔

They gazed each other because they are so similar that no one could distinguish.

Corrected: They gazed at each other because they were so similar that no one could distinguish them.​ ✔​

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/28/24)

1. 이건 뭐니?

What's this? ✔​

2. 짧구나.

It's short. ✔​

3. 아니야. 긴 연필이야.

No, it's long. ✔​

Well done Tae gyu. Keep it up and practice more. :)​