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Why do you think many people involved in the tomb’s excavation died early or in their 50s?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-05-22
작성글 A.) Why do you think many people involved in the tomb’s excavation died early or in their 50s? Please elaborate on your answer.

A recent paper says that ancient high-ranking tombs including the Tutankhamun's contain very high-level radiation.
Radiation is said to cause certain types of cancer.
So those involved in the excavation must have been exposed to radiation from certain radioactive materials in the tomb.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/20/24)

1. 바람을 쐬면 긴장이 좀 풀리거든요
Getting some fresh air would help me released.

2. 내가 깜빡 졸았나 보구나
I seemed to have nodded off.

3. 도와주고 싶지만 저도 꼼짝을 못하겠네요
I want to help you but I am also stuck.
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​A.) Why do you think many people involved in the tomb’s excavation died early or in their 50s? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A recent paper says that ancient high-ranking tombs including the Tutankhamun's contain very high-level radiation.

Radiation is said to cause certain types of cancer.  

So those involved in the excavation must have been exposed to radiation from certain radioactive materials in the tomb.  ✔️​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/20/24)

 

1. 바람을 쐬면 긴장이 좀 풀리거든요

Getting some fresh air would help me released.  ✔️​

 

2. 내가 깜빡 졸았나 보구나

I seemed to have nodded off. ✔️

​

3. 도와주고 싶지만 저도 꼼짝을 못하겠네요

I want to help you but I am also stuck.  ✔️

 

​•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.