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Homework - 2021.05.24 (Lydia)

교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2021-05-26
작성글 A. What kind of business would you like to start? Why?
- If I can start the business, I will start the business about some part of art for children. Because artistic activities are very good for childrens' growth and I really interested in this thing.

B. Make these sentences into English.
-나는 뒤에 남겨졌다. (I was left behind.)
-빨리 공부하는 게 좋을 거야. (It is better to study quickly.)
-당신 없이 내가 뭘 하겠어요? (What can I do without you?)
교정내용

A. What kind of business would you like to start? Why?

 - If I can start the business, I will start the business about some part of art for children. 

  => If I can start a business, I will start a business that has something to do with art for children.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

Because artistic activities are very good for childrens' growth and I really interested in this thing.

  => Because artistic activities are very good for children's growth and I am really interested in this thing.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-나는 뒤에 남겨졌다. (I was left behind.)   

-빨리 공부하는 게 좋을 거야. (It is better to study quickly.)

  => You better hit the books soon.​

  => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-당신 없이 내가 뭘 하겠어요? (What can I do without you?)

  => What would I do without you?​

  => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.