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제 목	How does Fiji make money?
교정강사	Colleen(C)
등록일	2023-02-04
작성글	A.) How does Fiji make money? Please elaborate on your answer. Fiji is famous for sugar and sandy beaches with all-year-round warm weather. Most people work in agriculture and tourism where they source their income. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/25/2023) 1.귀사의 나라에서 저희 브랜드를 개척하기를 희망합니다. We hope our brands to be launched in your country. 2.귀사의 나라에 저희 제품을 판매하고 싶습니다. We would like to sell our products in your country. 3.저희는 일반 수입 및 공급업체로 설립 되었습니다. Our company was incorporated for general import and supply.
교정내용	A.) How does Fiji make money? Please elaborate on your answer. Fiji is famous for sugar and sandy beaches with all-year-round warm weather. Most people work in agriculture and tourism where they source their income. ✔ B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/25/2023) 1.귀사의 나라에서 저희 브랜드를 개척하기를 희망합니다. We hope our brands to be launched in your country. ✔ 2.귀사의 나라에 저희 제품을 판매하고 싶습니다. We would like to sell our products in your country. ✔ 3.저희는 일반 수입 및 공급업체로 설립 되었습니다. Our company was incorporated for general import and supply. ✔ • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.