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Is it a good idea to elect a president who lacks experience in politics?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-01-12
작성글 A.) Is it a good idea to elect a president who lacks experience in politics? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

The president could consolidate people or parties of different interests.
It will require various experiences as well as knowledge.
The experience must include politics.
So it could not be a good idea to elect a president who lacks experience in politics.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/11/22)

1. 이 전 모델에 몇 가지 새로운 기능을 추가했습니다.
Several new functions are added to the previous model.

2. 저희 제품은 크기와 무게 면에서 들고 다니기 편합니다.
Our product is convenient to carry in size and weight.

3. 저희 제품을 2년간 보증합니다.
Our product will be guaranteed for 2 years.
교정내용

A.) Is it a good idea to elect a president who lacks experience in politics? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The president could consolidate people or parties of different interests.

It will require various experiences as well as knowledge.

The experience must include politics.

So it could not be a good idea to elect a president who lacks experience in politics.        ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/11/22)

 

1. 이 전 모델에 몇 가지 새로운 기능을 추가했습니다.

Several new functions are added to the previous model.    ✔

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2. 저희 제품은 크기와 무게 면에서 들고 다니기 편합니다.

Our product is convenient to carry in size and weight.  ✔

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 3. 저희 제품을 2년간 보증합니다.

Our product will be guaranteed for 2 years.  ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.