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Whay is puberty? -home work
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2023-01-12
작성글 What do you think what is puberty?
Puberty is a period that when we grow up.
When you are during puberty u will have more hair than before and you will be angry often,
And u will eat more,and get taller.
So this is puberty
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What do you think puberty is?

(Let's avoid using two question words in a sentence.)

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Puberty is a period when we grow up.

During puberty, you will have more hair than before and you will be angry often.

(Avoid redundancy of words or phrases.)

 

You will also eat more and get taller.

And that is puberty.