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What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why?

교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-12-20
작성글 (12/19/22)

A.) What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why? Please elaborate on your answer.

Animals listed in CITES Appendix 1 can't be traded.
Volcano rabbits and Mekong catfish are examples.
Those remind me of bears carrying a crescent pattern on the chest.
They are called 'Asiatic Black Bears'
They should be put in Appendix 1.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/19/22)

1. 불량품을 감지하는 센서가 있습니다.
We have a sensor detecting faulty goods.

2. 자회사에서 포장재료를 공급합니다.
A subsidiary company supplies packaging materials.

3. 짐은 그게 전부인가요?
Do you have no other baggage?
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(12/19/22)

 

A.) What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Animals listed in CITES Appendix 1 can't be traded.

Volcano rabbits and Mekong catfish are examples.

Those remind me of bears carrying a crescent pattern on the chest.

They are called 'Asiatic Black Bears' 

They should be put in Appendix 1.  ✔

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  B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/19/22)

 

1. 불량품을 감지하는 센서가 있습니다.

   We have a sensor detecting faulty goods.  ✔

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2. 자회사에서 포장재료를 공급합니다.

   A subsidiary company supplies packaging materials.    ✔

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  3. 짐은 그게 전부인가요?

   Do you have no other baggage?  ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.