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What should the Indian government do to help the economically, or socially, disadvantaged?

교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-08-30
작성글 A.) What should the Indian government do to help the economically, or socially, disadvantaged? Please elaborate on your answer.

The first thing for the Indian government to help the disadvantaged would be abolishing the Caste System.
Under the system, discriminating could be thought natural among people.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/19/22)

1. 여기 웬일이세요?
What has brought you here?

2. 내 이럴 줄 알았다
This is what I anticipated.

3. 이제 살았네요
Now we are safe.
교정내용

A.) What should the Indian government do to help the economically, or socially, disadvantaged? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

   The first thing for the Indian government to help the disadvantaged would be abolishing the Caste System.

  Under the system, discriminating could be thought  natural  among people.   

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 =>     The first thing for the Indian government to help the disadvantaged would be abolishing the Caste System.

  Under the system, discrimination could be thought natural among people.   ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/19/22)

 

1. 여기 웬일이세요?

   What has brought you here? ✔

​

 

2. 내 이럴 줄 알았다

   This is what I anticipated.  ✔

​

 

3. 이제 살았네요

   Now we are safe.  ✔

 

 

​• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​