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dictator in korea.-home work
교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-08-30
작성글 There was an presidents named Syngman Rhee(이승만) Bak Jeonghui(박정희) Chun Doo-hwan(전두환).
They were a president but almost dictator.
They just killed peoples and made a fake news.
For example in Gwangju Chun Doo hwan the president(dictator)just killed people and made a fake news.
And blocked the entrance so the people out in Gwangju and in Gwangju can't go in or go out.
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There were presidents named Syngman Rhee(이승만),  Bak Jeonghui(박정희) and Chun Doo-hwan(전두환).

They were presidents and dictators.

They killed people and made fake news.

For example in Gwangju, Chun Doo Hwan, the president(dictator), killed many people and made fake news.

He blocked the entrance so the people could not go inside or out of Gwangju.