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Should countries donate money to the Taliban government?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-07-28
작성글 A.) Should countries donate money to the Taliban government? Please elaborate on your answer.

Taliban seems to prioritize religion to people.
It would have no concern on people's difficulty.
Donated money will not be used to relieve victims from the earthquake strike.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/27/22)

1. 뭐든 요령이 있는 법이잖아요.
Anything needs tact.

2. 운명의 장난 이네.
It is a twist of fate.

3. 이것저것 좀 샀어요.
I shopped for something.
교정내용

A.) Should countries donate money to the Taliban government? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

   Taliban seems to prioritize religion to people.

   It would have no concern on people's difficulty.

   Donated money will not be used to relieve victims from the earthquake strike.

 

=> Taliban seems to prioritize religion over people.

   It would have no concern for people's difficulties.

   Donated money will not be used to relieve victims of the earthquake strike.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/27/22)

 

1. 뭐든 요령이 있는 법이잖아요.

    Anything needs tact. ✔

​

 

2. 운명의 장난 이네. 

    It is a twist of fate.  ✔

​

 

3. 이것저것 좀 샀어요.

    I shopped for something. ✔

​

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​