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교정강사 Jeniffer(C)
등록일 2021-03-29
작성글 A. Do you feel nervous or worried about the stressful situation?

Yes. I always feel nervous about the stressful situation, But continued period is comparatively short. Because I handle my stress well. I have various methods. For example, I read a book ( Books that I can easily read Korean eassy, novel), stroll my town and wirte a long long dairy.
And sometime I meet serious problem, I have meditation time and meet my friends.
-심판이 호각을 불었다.l
Referee blew a whistle.

-일부 아이들은 16살 때 학업을 그만둔다.
Some children quit their study by sixtheen.

-그 버스가 다리를 들이받았다.
The bus was running into the bridge.
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A. Do you feel nervous or worried about the stressful situation?

 

Yes. I always feel nervous about the stressful situation. But, continued period is comparatively short because I handle my stress well.  I have various methods. For example, I read a book ( books that I can easily read like Korean essay, novel), stroll my town and write a long long diary.

And sometime I meet serious problem, I have meditation time and meet my friends.

-심판이 호각을 불었다.  

Referee blew a whistle. --> The referee blew his whistle.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-일부 아이들은 16살 때 학업을 그만둔다.

Some children quit their study by sixteen. ---> Some children leave school at 16.

 ​=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

 

-그 버스가 다리를 들이받았다.

The bus was running into the bridge.​  ---> The bus hit the bridge.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.