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Who is Benjamin Franklin - home work

교정강사 Lovely(D)O
등록일 2022-07-26
작성글 Benjamin Franklin was who was actived many(such as scientist,inventor etc.)
And Benjamin Franklin is the person who made lightning rod first.
And he borned in U.S and he died in Philadelphia.
And he borned at January 17,1706.
He was a great inventor and scientist(etc.).
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Benjamin Franklin was active in the field of science.

He was the first person who made the lightning rod.

He was born in U.S and died in Philadelphia.

He was born on January 17, 1706.

He was a great inventor and a scientist.