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5/31 homework <J>
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-05-31
작성글 {HOMEWORK}
A.) Tell about a famous amusement park in Korea. Where's it located? What is special about that amusement park? Is it expensive? Please elaborate on your answer.
The famous amusement park is Everland. It`s in Yongin city, Gyeonggi. Safari is special thing in Everland. When I want to go Everland in my birthday,
I need to take 40,000 won.
B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/31/22)

-나는 우편 엽서를 사고 싶어요. = I want to buy a postcard.
-저기 보세요, 저것은 뭔가요? = Look at that. What is that?
-그것은 에펠 탑이란다. = That is the Eiffel Tower.
교정내용

{HOMEWORK}

A.) Tell about a famous amusement park in Korea. Where's it located? What is special about that amusement park? Is it expensive? Please elaborate on your answer.

The famous amusement park is Everland. It`s in Yongin city, Gyeonggi. Safari is special thing in Everland. When I want to go Everland in my birthday,

I need to take 40,000 won.

 

=>  The famous amusement park is Everland. It`s in Yongin City, Gyeonggi. Safari is a special thing in Everland. When I want to go to Everland on my birthday,

I need to take 40,000 won.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/31/22)

 

-나는 우편 엽서를 사고 싶어요. = I want to buy a postcard.  ✔

​

-저기 보세요, 저것은 뭔가요? = Look at that. What is that?  ✔

​

-그것은 에펠 탑이란다. = That is the Eiffel Tower.  => It's the Eiffel Tower.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​