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Should countries continue to use DST?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2022-05-07
작성글 A.) Should countries continue to use DST? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

DST is one of the ways against Nature.
That is because it manipulates time to attain some purposes which could be biased.
The premise that DST contributes to energy saving could not always be right.
So, I don't stand for continuing to use DST.


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(05/06/22)

-색깔 너무 튄다.
The color is too outstanding.

-지금 그대로도 괜찮아 보여.
It looks good as it is.

-이 드레스 너무 야하다
This dress is too erotic.
교정내용

A.) Should countries continue to use DST? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 DST is one of the ways against Nature.

 That is because it manipulates time to attain some purposes which could be biased.

 The premise that DST contributes to energy saving could not always be right.

 So, I don't stand for continuing to use DST.  ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/06/22)

 

-색깔 너무 튄다.

The color is too outstanding.  ✔​​

 

 

-지금 그대로도 괜찮아 보여.

 It looks good as it is.  ✔​​

 

 

-이 드레스 너무 야하다

 This dress is too erotic. ✔​​

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​