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| 제 목 | 220328  | 
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) | 
| 등록일 | 2022-03-30 | 
| 작성글 | A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer. I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/28/22) -몸 조심하세요. Take yourself. -한국에 도착하면 연락주세요. Please call me when you arrive in korea. -한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요. I will call you if I go to korea. | 
| 교정내용 | A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer. 
 I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others. 
 => I think people's different views cause conflicts. So, I think people have to adjust their thoughts to others. 
 
 B.) Make these sentences into English. 
 (03/28/22) 
 -몸 조심하세요. Take yourself. => Please take care. -한국에 도착하면 연락주세요. Please call me when you arrive in korea. => Please call me when you arrive in Korea. { Please be aware that a country's name's first letter should be capitalized. For example; South Korea and Philippines } 
 
 -한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요. I will call you if I go to korea. => I'll call if I ever go to Korea. { Capitalization } • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. | 
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