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본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-04-24
작성글 I uploaded my poem about frogs' singing to Internet poem club. Only one of the members replied.
I didn't do anything on that website for the time being and so the club members don't give me a concern.
I know when I give a comment to their poems, they show me their opinions about my poem, too.
So I commented some other poems first.
Well, I sent the poem to my table tennis partner through kakaotalk. He responded it right away.
He said that he pulled over his car next to the pond where the frogs are living and texted to me.
He happened to pass by the pond when I sent my poem. What a coinstance! Bye
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I uploaded my poem about frogs' singing on the website of the poem’s club. Only one of the members replied. I didn’t use the website for the time being and so the club members don't give comments about my poem. I know when I give a comment to their poems, they tell me their opinions about my poem, too. I know when I give a comment to their poems, they tell me their opinions about my poem, too. I know when I give a comment to their poems, they tell me their opinions about my poem, too. So, I commented to some poems. Well, I sent the poem to my table tennis partner through Kakaotalk. He responded right away. He said that he pulled over his car next to the pond where the frogs are living and texted me. He happened to pass by in the pond when I sent my poem. What a coincidence! Bye