본 화상영어는 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고 개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

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본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

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Book report2_2
교정강사 Nor(D)
등록일 2021-12-16
작성글 So Thunderhom, stering, Geronimo and talking book Vol, went to Sludge's place and Geronimo freed her! However, Sludge came after them. Luckily, water flowed all over the place, sludge melted in water. And Thunderhorn, stering and Vol, saved Geronimo. And he went back home, happily. <MY THOUGHT > I thought about this book and I thought it was about 'care'. Care is important in our lives and we use a lot of it, like we need to care our body, and we can do things better because we care it. You also can care someone, like our family. 'Care' is the most important thing in our lives too!
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I think this book, was about "care". Care is important in our lives and we use it a lot. For instance, we need to care for our bodies so we can do things better. We can also care for someone, like our FAMILY. Therefore, I consider care as the Most important thing in my life.