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Book report 1
교정강사 Nor(D)
등록일 2021-12-16
작성글 Geronimo was training and learning new things with master clever and blue wing. And Suddenly, red mini-dragen told Geranimo, Blossom's baby had been stolen! So Geronimo went to the crystal castle, and met Blossem. Blossom was sick! She said her baby had been stolen and the kingdom is in danger by the Darkshadow. Darkshadow makes everything sad and miserable. So Blossom moved the crystal castle with all her subjects to somewhere else. And Geronimo went to the Blossom's baby, winglet's room. And Geronimo find out Rowbar stoled her and there is a traitor between them! So he went to see Mel. Mel said go to the Fiery Abess and throw the crystle gem in its lava then the darkshadow will vaish. So Geronimo went to the Fierg Abess with his friend and Scribblehopper, Geronimo's best friend.
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I believed that everything happens for a reason. People can be mean and harsh, so you have to accept that and learn to let go. Sometimes things go wrong so that you can appreciate every littles things that you have and cherish every moment that you have with the person that you love. You tend to believed lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself.