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Summary 2_1
교정강사 Ann(D)
등록일 2021-11-25
작성글 Geronimo was having a nap. And suddenly, Thea called him and asked him to be a tour gguide for Tremblina and Creepella, in ten minutes! He was very tired, and he became even more tired, because of Trembling and creepella's shopping and dancing. Suddenly, Geronimo fell while dancing and then, he was on a dragon! The diagon landed in the kingdom of fastasy, Geronimo saw his friend waitting for him with the dragon king and queen. They said the five princessess had been kidnaped by the Darkrock with. So he needed to save them.
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