본 화상영어는 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고 개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

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본 화상영어는은 업계 최고의 노하우만을 연구하고
개발한, 가장 진보되고, 창의적인 교육 시스템 연구기관 입니다.

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04/21/21)
교정강사 Kristina(C)
등록일 2021-04-21
작성글 -Are there many beautiful beaches in your country? Which is your favorite? Tell me about it.
-No... there aren't many, but I like the sea. It's... Udo Coral Beach in Udo! I like it because the sea is emerald colored.

https://www.google.com/search?q=%EC%A0%9C%EC%A3%BC%EB%8F%84%EC%9D%98+%EB%B0%94%EB%8B%A4&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjz4PzOso_wAhUUZt4KHcsoCL8Q_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=936&bih=500

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-04/21/21)
-what? at there!
-Oh no!
-Look at that, there's an elephant!
교정내용 ​-Are there many beautiful beaches in your country? Which is your favorite? Tell me about it.
  -No... there aren't many, but I like the sea. It's... Udo Coral Beach in Udo! I like it because the sea is emerald colored.​ *No, there aren't. I like the sea called Udo Coral Beach. I like it because the its water is emerald-colored.

~> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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​(04/21/21)

​-뭐라고? 거기 서! -what? at there! *What? Stop there!

​~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​​

-오,싫어요! -Oh no! ✔​​​​

-저것 봐, 코끼리가 있어! -Look at that, there's an elephant! *Look! There's an elephant. 

~>This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. ​​

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Hi, Darling! Thank you for showing me your favorite beach! I purple you! ♥​​