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Book Report (The Battle for Crystal Castle) - 2
교정강사 Leni(D)
등록일 2021-11-03
작성글 Mossy and Creasely wrinkledom. But winglet friend, Flamelet betrayed her! She was wither's daughter! However winglet returned the crown and became the emperer. Even if we have hard time, we can overcome it with hope. And I can see that love is very cool especially Winglet because she was worried about her Mom Blossom, of being in the crystal castle without her. I like that from her. So I find out Love from someone is very important and good. I'll try to love god a lot like Winglet.
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