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제 목	Today is Sep. 23th, Thursday.
교정강사	Happy(C)
등록일	2021-09-23
작성글	A. What is your favorite fairy tale story? Why do you like it? My favorite fairy tale story is 'Jack and the Bean Stalk'. Because I'm surprised of the big bean tree. B. Make these sentences into English. 09/23/21) -파이 먹을래? Do you want some pie? -음! 좋아. Yes! -덕보는 어떠니? 그는 파이를 먹고 싶어 하니? How about Dugbo? Does he want some pie?
교정내용	A. What is your favorite fairy tale story? Why do you like it? My favorite fairy tale story is 'Jack and the Bean Stalk'. Because I'm surprised of the big bean tree. Corrected: My favorite fairy tale story is 'Jack and the Bean Stalk', because I'm surprised of the big bean tree. ( The sentence is corrected grammatically. B. Make these sentences into English. 09/23/21) -파이 먹을래? Do you want some pie? ✔ -음! 좋아. Yes! ✔ Mmm! That sounds good. (Another way) -덕보는 어떠니? 그는 파이를 먹고 싶어 하니? How about Dugbo? Does he want some pie?✔