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Should the American and NATO forces have stayed in Afghanistan?

교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-09-13
작성글 A.) Should the American and NATO forces have stayed in Afghanistan? Please elaborate your answer.

All the countries which participated in the war should have checked if their initial purpose attained
and what would happen to the Afghans who have had no idea on the reason why their land became
a hostile battlefield for so long time before they decided to leave.
They don't seem to have done it. So I could say that it was not proper time for them to leave at least .


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(09/13/21)

-여자친구 앞에서 폼 잡고 스키를 탔어.
I boasted to ski in front of girlfriend.

-많이 마셨나 봐요. 필름이 끊겼어요.
I might have drunken much. I blacked out.

-화장만 고치고 금방 올게요.
I will be back shortly just after fixing my make-up.


교정내용

A.) Should the American and NATO forces have stayed in Afghanistan? Please elaborate your answer.

 

    All the countries which participated in the war should have checked if their initial purpose attained 

and what would happen to the Afghans who have had no idea on the reason why their land became 

a hostile battlefield for so long time before they decided to leave. ​

 They don't seem to have done it.  So I could say that it was not proper time for them to leave at least . 

    

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(09/13/21)

 

-여자친구 앞에서 폼 잡고 스키를 탔어.

I boasted to ski in front of girlfriend. 

=> I was showing off my skiing skills in front of my girlfriend.

 

-많이 마셨나 봐요. 필름이 끊겼어요.

 I might have drunken much. I blacked out. 

-화장만 고치고 금방 올게요.

 I will be back shortly just after fixing my make-up.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> I'll be right back. I need to freshen up.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.