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교정강사 Cris
등록일 2021-07-11
작성글 What are the reasons of sibling rivalry?

1. They want to get parent's love more than their sibling.
they try to attract parent's attention more than their sibling.
2. Parents make a comparison between siblings.
it cause a lot of competition between siblings.
3. siblings tend to think that "it's always my loss than my siblings"
eldest usually learn that you have to concede to your younger brother. in the other hand, younger brother feel that they can not follow eldest various ability.
the one of the most important, partents always make thier childrend realize that siblings have to help each other. not competition.

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1.  They want t get their parent's attention more than their sibling. ----- this sentence is more appropriate. 

You can also try these answers for no. 2 question. Comparison -- Which sibling is more loveable?

-- Which sibling is has a better job and earns more money.

-- Which sibling has a better life, or who is more successful.

3. Siblings will tend to think about their failures. (this is an expressions to elaborate the word: loss)

eldest usually learn that you have to concede to your younger brother. on the other hand, the younger brother feels that they can not follow eldest various abilities. The most important is that parents always make their children realize that siblings have to help each other rather to compete.