1.아빠가 상품으로 받으신거야. 나는 아빠가 자랑스러웠어.

   Dad got it as prize.  I was proud of my dad.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 =>  My father won a prize. I was proud of him.

2.퍼레이드도 봤니?

   Did you see the parade?  ✔

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3.물론이지. 모두 아름답더라. 우리는 그 사람들이랑 사진도 찍었어.

   Of course. They were all beautiful.  we even took pictures with them.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.​

=>  Of course, we did. The people were all beautiful. We took a picture with them. 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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Dear Colleen

Merry Christmas teacher

Do you believe in Santa? I believe in Santa. because there's Santa village in Finland.

This surprising.

 Have a great Christmas teacher.

              From Hey in

Hello there Hye In!

Of course i believe that there's Santa because he used to give me some presents when I was your age. I was so happy about it.
Stay sweet and kind, Hye In!
Merry Christmas to you abd to your family! Enjoy the holiday season!.