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교정강사 Erica(C)
등록일 2021-03-17
작성글 A. Do you think it’s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time?

To do so, husband should be willing to do houseworks after his job. When wife is charge of housework alone, she is never happy. She is just exhausted at home. How about raising a baby? This is a lot of work for woman to do.
But nowadays, people push them to have a super power in the world. It is like money is everything these days. I know the word DINK(double income no kid).

(03/17/21)
-그는 처음부터 자신의 결백을 주장했습니다.
-He insisted on his innocense on the beginning.

-그녀는 남편을 속이고 바람을 피우고 있어요.
-She is cheating on her husband.

-내일 파티 가는 것은 사양하겠습니다.
-I'll give up going to the party tomorrow.

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A. Do you think it’s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time?

 

To do so, the husband should be willing to do household chores / house works after his job. When the wife is in-charge of housework alone, she is never happy.  She is just exhausted at home. How about raising a baby? This is a lot of work for a woman to do. But nowadays, people push them to have a super power in the world. It is like money is everything these days. I know the word DINK (double income, no kid).

 

(03/17/21)

-그는 처음부터 자신의 결백을 주장했습니다.

-He insisted on his innocense on the beginning. -> He has insisted on his innocence from the beginning. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.  => Corrected spelling.

 

-그녀는 남편을 속이고 바람을 피우고 있어요.

-She is cheating on her husband. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

-내일 파티 가는 것은 사양하겠습니다.

-I'll give up going to the party tomorrow. -> I'll pass on going to a party tomorrow.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it. 

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