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제 목 Why was it important for the AU leaders to ban the donkey skin trade?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-03-12
작성글 A.) Why was it important for the AU leaders to ban the donkey skin trade? Please elaborate on your answer.

Donkey population is said to be around 53 millions while 5 millions are slaughtered for their skins.
Trades with China would push forward the slaughter.
So AU's banning the donkey skin trade is very appropriate.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/11/24)

1. 저희 가게는 이번 분기 판매목표를 달성했습니다.
Our store has reached the goal of sales for this quarter.

2. 저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다.
Our store has fulfilled the qualification for rebate.

3. 당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다.
Congratulations on your achievement.
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A.) Why was it important for the AU leaders to ban the donkey skin trade? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The donkey population is said to be around 53 million while 5 million are slaughtered for their skins.

Trades with China would push forward the slaughter.

So AU's banning the donkey skin trade is very appropriate.  ✔️

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/11/24)

 

1. 저희 가게는 이번 분기 판매목표를 달성했습니다.

 Our store has reached the goal of sales for this quarter.  ✔️

​2. 저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다.

Our store has fulfilled the qualification for rebate.  ✔️

​3. 당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다.

Congratulations on your achievement.  ✔️

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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