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Should the government focus more on cancer prevention or treatment?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2024-03-05 |
| 작성글 |
A.) Should the government focus more on cancer prevention or treatment? Why? Please elaborate on your answer. As time goes by, the age of people increases. The older people are, the more likely they are to get cancer. Any type of cancer is said to be able to be treated if it is found early. So the government should focus more on cancer prevention. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/04/24) 1. 신용장을 개설하는 대신 가격을 낮춰줄 수 있나요? Can I have benefit of discount in exchange for opening the letter of credit. 2. 외상으로 구매하고자 합니다. I would like to purchase on credit. 3. 저희와의 거래가 얼마 되지 않은 것을 감안하면 어려울 것 같습니다. Considering that you haven't traded with us for so long, it would be difficult. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) Should the government focus more on cancer prevention or treatment? Why? Please elaborate on your answer.
As time goes by, the age of people increases. The older people are, the more likely they are to get cancer. Any type of cancer is said to be able to be treated if it is found early. So the government should focus more on cancer prevention. ✔️
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(03/04/24)
1. 신용장을 개설하는 대신 가격을 낮춰줄 수 있나요? Can I have benefit of discount in exchange for opening the letter of credit. => Is it possible to receive a discount in return for the letter of credit?
2. 외상으로 구매하고자 합니다. I would like to purchase on credit. ✔️ 3. 저희와의 거래가 얼마 되지 않은 것을 감안하면 어려울 것 같습니다. Considering that you haven't traded with us for so long, it would be difficult. ✔️
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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