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| 제 목 |
If you could make the vernal equinox a holiday, what events would you organize?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2024-04-09 |
| 작성글 |
A.) If you could make the vernal equinox a holiday, what events would you organize? Please elaborate on your answer. The vernal equinox is an astronomical event in which daylight and darkness equal in length of time. It would awaken people to enjoy the Spring. So I want to persuade family members to go for a picnic. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/08/24) 1. 계약을 맺기로 하지요. Let's sign a contract. 2. 이제 계약만이 남은 것 같군요. All have been done except for the contract signing. 3. 계약서 초안을 검토해 주세요. Please check the draft of contract. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) If you could make the vernal equinox a holiday, what events would you organize? Please elaborate on your answer.
The vernal equinox is an astronomical event in which daylight and darkness equal in length of time. It would awaken people to enjoy the Spring. So I want to persuade family members to go for a picnic. ✔️
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(04/08/24)
1. 계약을 맺기로 하지요. Let's sign a contract. ✔️
2. 이제 계약만이 남은 것 같군요. All have been done except for the contract signing. ✔️
3. 계약서 초안을 검토해 주세요. Please check the draft of the contract. ✔️
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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