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Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit?![]()  | 
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) | 
| 등록일 | 2022-09-07 | 
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A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/07/22) 1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요? Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern? 2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야. I am cooling down my head for a while. 3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다. Pray for the bliss of the dead.  | 
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 A.) Is it a good idea to ask climbers to pay a deposit? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. 
 Climbing is a challenging leisure sports. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking a deposit could be one of good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not. 
 => Climbing is a challenging leisure sport. So it is vulnerable to accidents. It would be reasonable to permit the climbing only to those who are well preserved. Asking for a deposit could be one of the good ways to discern whether applicants are qualified or not. 
 
 B.) Make these sentences into English. 
 (09/07/22) 
 1. 마음을 털어놓을 수 있는 친구 있으세요? Do you have friends whom you could consult about a concern? ✔  
 2. 잠시 머리 좀 식히는 거야. I am cooling down my head for a while. ✔  
 3. 고인의 명복을 빕니다. Pray for the bliss of the dead. ✔ 
 • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.  | 
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