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| 제 목 |
Sad day |
|---|---|
| 교정강사 | Bea(D)O |
| 등록일 | 2022-09-06 |
| 작성글 |
Today, number 11 typhoon came our town. so I didn't go school. But luckily, there aren't hurt people in my family. And after the typhoon pass I go to the academy. |
| 교정내용 |
Hello Claire, Thank you for messaging, but I'm glad to hear about you. I hope you're doing well.
Better say: Today, a number 11 typhoon came to our town. So I didn't go to school. But luckily, there aren't hurt people in my family. And after the typhoon passed, I went to the academy. |
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