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Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country?![]()  | 
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) | 
| 등록일 | 2021-07-25 | 
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A.) Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country? Among many cities I have ever visited, Busan would be the most livable in Korea. It has good environment and climate. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/16/21) -교체하는데 드는 비용은 저희가 부담합니다. We will pay for the replacement cost. -하자가 계속해서 발견되면 협력업체를 바꿔야 핛지도 모르겠네요. If faults are found continuously, we might have to change the partner. -젗품을 시험해보기 위해 리드 타임이 더 필요합니다 we need more lead-time to test products.  | 
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 A.) Which city do you think is the “most livable” in your country? 
 Among many cities I have ever visited, Busan would be the most livable in Korea. √  It has good environment and climate. => It has a good environment and climate.   B.) Make these sentences into English. 
 (07/16/21) 
 -교체하는데 드는 비용은 저희가 부담합니다. We will pay for the replacement cost. OR => Replacements are made at our expense.  -하자가 계속해서 발견되면 협력업체를 바꿔야 핛지도 모르겠네요. If faults are found continuously, we might have to change the partner. OR => We might have to change business partners if defective products keep appearing.  -젗품을 시험해보기 위해 리드 타임이 더 필요합니다 we need more lead-time to test products. => We need more lead time to test our products. 
 
 • Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   | 
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