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When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?![]()  | 
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) | 
| 등록일 | 2021-07-17 | 
| 작성글 | 
A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why? I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/09/21) -추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요? Does additional fee enable me to get priority? -적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다. Let's look for an appropriate insurer. -우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다 I would like our products to be insured.  | 
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 A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why? 
 I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn. 
 => I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was born. 
 B.) Make these sentences into English. 
 (07/09/21) 
 -추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요? Does additional fee enable me to get priority? 
 OR => Could we ask for preferential treatment in return for extra payment?  -적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다. Let's look for an appropriate insurer. 
 OR => Let's find an appropriate insurance company. 
 -우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다 I would like our products to be insured. √  • Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   | 
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